It was a little sad…

It was a little sad when he brought the body to us
Even though the body was only of a cricket.
It was sadder when he started singing over the body
With shrill notes he learned from the cricket.

Saddest of all was when the boy spent the next few days
Building the casket out of miniature planks
Submerging the remains of his friend with three tears.
Unbearably liberating when he told us this fate is ours.

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  1. Stacey C. Johnson's avatar Stacey C. Johnson says:

    The song is haunting in a powerful way: “With shrill notes he learned from the cricket.” Thank you, Richard.

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    1. Richard Q's avatar Richard Q says:

      Thank you, Stacey. Even your comments on a piece continue to stimulate. The word haunting is encompassing here.

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